The Original Story
| The Raven And The Fox. By Jean de La Fontaine Mr. Raven was perched upon a limb, And Reynard the Fox looked up at him; For the Raven held in his great big beak A morsel the Fox would go far to seek. Said the Fox, in admiring tones: “My word! Sir Raven, you are a handsome bird. Such feathers! If you would only sing, The birds of these woods would call you King.” The Raven, who did not see the joke, Forgot that his voice was just a croak. He opened his beak, in his foolish pride – And down fell the morsel the Fox had spied. “Ha-ha!” said the Fox. “And now you see You should not listen to flattery. Vanity, Sir is a horrid vice – I’m sure the lesson is worth the price.” |
The poem below is a poem I wote in a response to the original fable. I also have a YouTube video that goes further. Where Raven takes action against the cunning fox in a reimagined tale.
The Fox and the Raven: Ravens Defeat by C.J. Grasso
Oh, foolish Raven boasting of sound
The foxes’ cunning words caused you to spill your goods on the ground
How must you feel being tricked
Sometimes, generous words can cause inner conflict
Blinding the senses and keeping them bound
A boastful spirit will fall to pride
Leaving you hungry and unsatisfied
Quickly falling prey to those with a manipulative mind
Life does not care how much you work and grind
Nor if you fall for the foxes’ lies
If you do not think before you speak
Indeed, you will soon weep
Crying over the goods you lost
Was proving a point worth the cost
The experiance of a fool’s defeat
Reflection
As I was reading the fable, I realized how sweet words can trick the mind and lead to acting boastfully or proving a point. As someone who has recently experienced the effects of manipulation by listening to pleasant, sweet, cunning words only to be taken advantage of in the end, it really hit home. I remember feeling foolish and upset, which is why I felt like the Raven.
The raven, wanting to show the fox that it does have a voice, did not think of the cheese in its mouth and dropped it by showing the fox its voice. It was manipulated to drop the cheese by nice words and psychological tricks. The poem reflects how the raven must feel and how listening to sweet nothings can cost you in the end.
Digging deeper I wanted to make a version of the famous fable where the raven learns his lesson and additionally stands up to the fox, who continues to try and push his luck with fake lies and apologies. I converted it into a storybook style video below.
The Fox and the Raven: A Lesson Learned Reimagned by C.J. Grasso
Have you ever been tricked by people using sweet words? What lessons did you learn?






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